#011: The Hit
Scene: 1
Akram: Didja get ‘em?
Abbas (patting his backpack…): They’re all here…
Shankar: Our reputation is at stake… we must not fail…
Abbas: Don’t worry… I never miss my target….
Scene: 2
Nanditha: No!!… Don’t!!…
Laughing raucously… they shoot her in cold blood…
Her pristine white dress stained blood red… she collapses…
Holi HAI!!!!
I figured I should put this one up now… given the theme… I hope you enjoyed it...
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2 comments:
Haha that was a fun read.Even at the end I was sure that the guys were murdering that woman.
The 'Holi HAI' line cleared my doubts.
Nice write again!
I may put out a slightly altered version later... making it more clear what happened... so that readers might be fully convinced that Nanditha is alive and well... LoL...
It might not be a 55... but a longer fiction... I found this idea really cool once I was done with it... could be better with more words... Oh well.. time will tell...
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